My Latest Poem - The Hunger?

My god, is this a poem about a call? Anyway, the diction of the first paragraph is excellent, somewhat surreal in fact. The second stanza has a nice rhythm to it, again the diction is good, but I am not sure what your "shape" is referring to. As for the third, it is very abstract and ambiguous, applicable to interpretations beyond a phone call, and I must say I love it (especially "The compulsive hunger speaks", very nice!)